Composition

2017-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher! Did you rest well last weekend? In my case, I was stuck at home and watched some programs that I like but I was unable to watch on TV because I don't have a TV. ^^;; It was too cold to go out so I become a couch potato. I think it is also a kind of happiness to me. Hehehe~ I am somehow suffering from Monday sickness but I don't think it would last longer. By the way, we talked about our personality but we only focused on our bad side. Today, let's talk about our good side! ^^ See you later!~ P.S.: I am curious about what you corrected. 1. Usually, I cook him some dishes. -> Is this sentence not correct? >> Usually, I cook some dishes for him.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I commend you when it comes to your sentence construction.

Your spoken and written English are great! ^^

My weekend was really good. I was able to sleep a lot.

I was not active last weekend. I failed about my new Year\'s Resolution. T_T

See you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> Correct
 Did you rest well last weekend?

>> Correct
 In my case, I was stuck at home and watched some programs that I like but I was unable to watch on TV because I don\'t have a TV. ^^;; 

>> Correct
 It was too cold to go out so I become a couch potato.

>> It was too cold to go out so I became a couch potato.
 I think it is also a kind of happiness to me. Hehehe~ 

>> Correct (hahaha)
 I am somehow suffering from Monday sickness but I don\'t think it would last longer. 

>>  I am somehow suffering from Monday sickness, but I don\'t think it would last longer. (Put a comma after the word \"sickness\")
 By the way, we talked about our personality but we only focused on our bad side.

>> Correct (Yes, I agree on you with this.)
 Today, let\'s talk about our good side! ^^

>> Correct
 See you later!~
>> Correct


 P.S.: I am curious about what you corrected.
>> Correct
1. Usually, I cook him some dishes. -> Is this sentence not correct?

>> Correct (Yes, it is. Maybe I just forgot to put the word \"correct\" or the word \"or\" I\'m sorry for this.)
>> Usually, I cook some dishes for him.

>> Correct

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