Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I commend you when it comes to your sentence construction.
Your spoken and written English are great! ^^
My weekend was really good. I was able to sleep a lot.
I was not active last weekend. I failed about my new Year\'s Resolution. T_T
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
>> Correct
Did you rest well last weekend?
>> Correct
In my case, I was stuck at home and watched some programs that I like but I was unable to watch on TV because I don\'t have a TV. ^^;;
>> Correct
It was too cold to go out so I become a couch potato.
>> It was too cold to go out so I became a couch potato.
I think it is also a kind of happiness to me. Hehehe~
>> Correct (hahaha)
I am somehow suffering from Monday sickness but I don\'t think it would last longer.
>> I am somehow suffering from Monday sickness, but I don\'t think it would last longer. (Put a comma after the word \"sickness\")
By the way, we talked about our personality but we only focused on our bad side.
>> Correct (Yes, I agree on you with this.)
Today, let\'s talk about our good side! ^^
>> Correct
See you later!~
>> Correct
P.S.: I am curious about what you corrected.
>> Correct
1. Usually, I cook him some dishes. -> Is this sentence not correct?
>> Correct (Yes, it is. Maybe I just forgot to put the word \"correct\" or the word \"or\" I\'m sorry for this.)
>> Usually, I cook some dishes for him.
>> Correct
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