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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about how you reduce your stress.
I guess, that is usual for women who are stressed.
Well, in my case, I just eat and sleep.
So the tendency is for me to get chubbier or fatter. ^^
I want to change this habit when I\'m stressed because it will give me more stress if I gained weight. hehe
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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It is too cold this morning.
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I feel sick and tired of the cold weather.
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It has lasted too long. ^^;;
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I hope I can greet the warm weather very soon.
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By the way, yesterday, we only talked about a good side of my personality.
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>> Or: By the way, yesterday, we only talked about the good side of my personality.
Today, let\'s talk about a good side of yours.
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Finally, I am going to express my opinion about a topic below.
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*How can you reduce stress?
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I usually eat more and go to a shop called \'Dayiso\' to buy things when I get stressed.
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When it comes to eating, I eat a expensive dish that I don\'t think it is worth to pay.
>> When it comes to eating, I eat an expensive dish that I don\'t think it is worth to pay.
If I didn\'t still get rid of my stress, I go to \'Dayiso\' and buy things that are not that necessary.
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Fortunately, the prices there are all cheap so it doesn\'t affect my budget. ^^;;
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For your reference, \'Dayiso\' is a kind of \'Unitop\' there.
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That is all for today and see you later! ^^**
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