Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Good afternoon too! ^^
Well, I have written my answers below.
Let\'s talk about stress and relieving stress. ^^
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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Today is Hump day so it could make our feeling down.
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Moreover, it is raining here so I somehow feel like blue.
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>> or: Moreover, it is raining here so I somehow feel gloomy.
Don\'t worry about me. It is not that severe. ^^
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By the way, I\'d like to ask you some questions about our last conversation.
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1. When it comes to refrigerator, it has two parts, one makes things freeze and the other one just stores things cold.
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Which one is the same meaning with \'fridge\'?
>> Which one has the same meaning with \'fridge\'? (The one that just stores or makes things cold is also the fridge. The upper part or the first one is called a freezer.)
2. I want to know about the meaning of this sentence \'You just have to be yourself.\' in detail.
>> correct (It means that you have to show the real you, your attitude or your personality. Do not pretend just to please someone or everybody. For example, if you\'re angry, then show that you\'re angry. It\'s like showing your true emotions. I hope this will satisfy you and if you have more questions, you can ask me later. ^^)
Finally, let\'s talk about stress in workplace. ^^
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See you soon!
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