Composition

2017-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher! A happy Thursday to you! Yesterday, we talked about stress and you said you don't have a lot of stresses in your workplace. I was very envious of your situation. ^^ As we already know, all diseases are caused by stresses so if we can control our stresses well, we could live healthily. However, people today can't help being exposed to various stressful situations from the relationship among humans and unexpected affairs. Maybe, to protect us from stresses would be a main factor that decides the quality of our lives. That is all for today and let's talk about 'Is marriage is stressful for women?' later. See you soon! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I think, that is a challenge for us to overcome.

Otherwise, we are going to suffer from various diseases due to stress.

I guess, I just learnt how to deal with stress because of my past experiences.

If it\'s just a petty thing, I just ignore it.

Yes, let\'s talk about that later.

See you! ^^


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Good afternoon, teacher! 

>> correct
 A happy Thursday to you!

>> correct
 Yesterday, we talked about stress and you said you don\'t have a lot of stresses in your workplace. 

>> correct
 I was very envious of your situation. ^^

>> correct
 As we already know, all diseases are caused by stresses so if we can control our stresses well, we could live healthily. 

>> correct
 However, people today can\'t help being exposed to various stressful situations from the relationship among humans and unexpected affairs. 

>> correct
 Maybe, to protect us from stresses would be a main factor that decides the quality of our lives. 

>> correct
 That is all for today and let\'s talk about \'Is marriage is stressful for women?\' later. 

>> That is all for today and let\'s talk about, \'Is marriage stressful for women?\' later.  
 See you soon! ^^**

>> correct

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