Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I think, that is a challenge for us to overcome.
Otherwise, we are going to suffer from various diseases due to stress.
I guess, I just learnt how to deal with stress because of my past experiences.
If it\'s just a petty thing, I just ignore it.
Yes, let\'s talk about that later.
See you! ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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A happy Thursday to you!
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Yesterday, we talked about stress and you said you don\'t have a lot of stresses in your workplace.
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I was very envious of your situation. ^^
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As we already know, all diseases are caused by stresses so if we can control our stresses well, we could live healthily.
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However, people today can\'t help being exposed to various stressful situations from the relationship among humans and unexpected affairs.
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Maybe, to protect us from stresses would be a main factor that decides the quality of our lives.
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That is all for today and let\'s talk about \'Is marriage is stressful for women?\' later.
>> That is all for today and let\'s talk about, \'Is marriage stressful for women?\' later.
See you soon! ^^**
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