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Hi, [이름]!

That was an interesting topic we talked about yesterday.

I think, the preparation before getting married is really stressful for both sides.

Yes, let\'s talk about the birth rate later.

See you!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

Good afternoon, teacher!

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 Yesterday, we talk about a topic \'Is marriage stressful for women\'? 

>> Yesterday, we talked about the topic \'Is marriage stressful for women\'? 
 Yes, it is, especially in Korea. 

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 As long as women get married, they have started having a lot of burden.

>> As soon as women get married, they started having a lot of burdens.
 Because of that, many professional working women don\'t want to get married early. 

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 Nowadays, this phenomenon can be found easily anywhere so it became a social issue.

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The most serious problem is a low birth rate.

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>> Or: The most serious problem is the low birth rate.
 Korea has the lowest birth rate in Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development so it has become our crucial issue to be solved. 

>>  Korea has the lowest birth rate in the Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development so it has become our crucial issue to be solved. 
 However, I don\'t think this situation would get better in a short period of time because it is really related to our economic situation and our unique culture that has been worse for women than for men.

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 How about your country? 

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 I want to listen to your situation there. ^^

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 See you soon!

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