Composition

2017-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! Did you take a rest well last weekend? In my case, I went out to watch a movie and attend a sports fair. The movie that I watched was directed by my husband's university senior. However, the movie reviews were not good so I didn't expect the movie, but the story was better than I thought. My rate of this movie is 7.5 out of 10. This movie is about 'Lucid Dream' and it is the title as well. If you have an interest in this topic, you can watch it someday. Since I wrote about movie, let's talk about it in our class today ! ^^ See you soon!

강사 첨삭


Hi, [이름]!


My weekend was great because we celebrated my mom\'s birthday. ^^

I ate a lot and now I\'m suffering from abnormal bowel movement. hehe

Actually, movie is a great topic to talk about.

See you later! ^^


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Good afternoon, Teacher!

>> Correct
 Did you take a rest well last weekend? 

>> Correct
 In my case, I went out to watch a movie and attend a sports fair.

>>  In my case, I went out to watch a movie and attended a sports fair.
 The movie that I watched was directed by my husband\'s university senior. 

>> Correct
 However, the movie reviews were not good so I didn\'t expect the movie, but the story was better than I thought. 

>>  However, the movie reviews were not good so I didn\'t expect the movie to be great, but the story was better than I thought. 
My rate of this movie is 7.5 out of 10.

>> Correct
 This movie is about \'Lucid Dream\' and it is the title as well. 

>> Correct 
If you have an interest in this topic, you can watch it someday. 

>> Correct
 Since I wrote about movie, let\'s talk about it in our class today ! ^^

>> Correct
 See you soon!

>> Correct

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