Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
My weekend was great because we celebrated my mom\'s birthday. ^^
I ate a lot and now I\'m suffering from abnormal bowel movement. hehe
Actually, movie is a great topic to talk about.
See you later! ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good afternoon, Teacher!
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Did you take a rest well last weekend?
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In my case, I went out to watch a movie and attend a sports fair.
>> In my case, I went out to watch a movie and attended a sports fair.
The movie that I watched was directed by my husband\'s university senior.
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However, the movie reviews were not good so I didn\'t expect the movie, but the story was better than I thought.
>> However, the movie reviews were not good so I didn\'t expect the movie to be great, but the story was better than I thought.
My rate of this movie is 7.5 out of 10.
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This movie is about \'Lucid Dream\' and it is the title as well.
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If you have an interest in this topic, you can watch it someday.
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Since I wrote about movie, let\'s talk about it in our class today ! ^^
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See you soon!
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