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2017-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! Yesterday, we talked about movies and I have already found the movie that you recommended to me. I am going to watch it tomorrow and I will let you know my review about it. I think it would be a good choice to watch movies in a gloomy day. Of course, the meaning of Independence Movement Day shouldn’t be forgotten, especially in this political situation. I am also going to take part in the candlelight rally and shout out for our bright future. By the way, which one is good for our today’s topic? How about the president? See you later! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Indeed, watching movies is a good thing to do when it\'s a gloomy day.

It\'s like the environment is silent and you can enjoy watching. ^^

I don\'t remember the last time I watched a movie. ^___^

Anyway, let\'s talk about the president later.

Maybe, about your president because she is controversial.


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> correct
 Yesterday, we talked about movies and I have already found the movie that you recommended to me. 

>> correct
 I am going to watch it tomorrow and I will let you know my review about it. 

>> correct
 I think it would be a good choice to watch movies in a gloomy day. 

>> correct
 Of course, the meaning of Independence Movement Day shouldn’t be forgotten, especially in this political situation.

>> correct
 I am also going to take part in the candlelight rally and shout out for our bright future. 

>> correct
 By the way, which one is good for our today’s topic? 

>> correct
 How about the president? 

>> correct
 See you later! ^^

>> correct

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