Composition
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Hi, [이름]!
Indeed, watching movies is a good thing to do when it\'s a gloomy day.
It\'s like the environment is silent and you can enjoy watching. ^^
I don\'t remember the last time I watched a movie. ^___^
Anyway, let\'s talk about the president later.
Maybe, about your president because she is controversial.
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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Yesterday, we talked about movies and I have already found the movie that you recommended to me.
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I am going to watch it tomorrow and I will let you know my review about it.
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I think it would be a good choice to watch movies in a gloomy day.
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Of course, the meaning of Independence Movement Day shouldn’t be forgotten, especially in this political situation.
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I am also going to take part in the candlelight rally and shout out for our bright future.
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By the way, which one is good for our today’s topic?
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How about the president?
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See you later! ^^
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