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2017-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. How have you been? I've been good. 3 weeks ago, I moved to a new house. My new house is very near to the previous one. Actually, it's on the opposite side of the previous one. I decided to move here because my son's several friends live here. Some of them are Korean students. Also,I have another news to tell you. I am learning how to drive. I told you before that I have a driving license, but I can't drive. However, I had no choice but to learn how to drive. The area where I live doesn't have public transport such as bus or subway. So, most of people here have their own car and drive by themselves. At first, I hesitated to drive here. It's because that Malaysia has right-hand drive system whereas Korea has left-hand drive system. I was worried that I could get used to do that. However, I guess that I have been doing well until now. Today, I drove my son to the private academy where he is having an English class. It was really successful.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kaylee!

It\'s been TOO LONG!

Thank you for writing to me again.

I\'ve been dying to hear from you. T_T

I\'m so delighted to hear that you are finally driving.

I\'m so envious! When will I ever learn how to drive? Haha!

Don\'t worry too much about the driving system there, just enjoy this newly acquired skill. ^^

Have fun, but not too much.

Drive safely, okay?

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~

Hello, teacher.

>> CORRECT!
How have you been?

>> CORRECT!
I\'ve been good.

>> CORRECT!
3 weeks ago, I moved to a new house.

>> CORRECT!
My new house is very near to the previous one.

>> My new house is close to the previous one.
Actually, it\'s on the opposite side of the previous one.

>> CORRECT!
I decided to move here because my son\'s several friends live here.

>> I decided to move because several of my son\'s friends live here.
Some of them are Korean students.

>> CORRECT!
Also,I have another news to tell you.

>> CORRECT!
I am learning how to drive.

>> CORRECT!
I told you before that I have a driving license, but I can\'t drive.

>> I told you before that I have a driver\'s license but I can\'t drive.
However, I had no choice but to learn how to drive.

>> CORRECT!
The area where I live doesn\'t have public transport such as bus or subway.

>> The area where I live in doesn\'t have public transportation such as a bus or a subway.
So, most of people here have their own car and drive by themselves.

>> So most people here have their own cars and drive themselves.
At first, I hesitated to drive here.

>> CORRECT!
It\'s because that Malaysia has right-hand drive system whereas Korea has left-hand drive system.

>> It\'s because Malaysia has the right-hand driving system, whereas Korea has the left-hand driving system.
I was worried that I could get used to do that.

>> I was worried of getting used to that.
However, I guess that I have been doing well until now.

>> CORRECT!
Today, I drove my son to the private academy where he is having an English class.

>> CORRECT!
It was really successful.

>> CORRECT!

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