Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Good afternoon too!
Actually, you had a relaxing holiday.
Reading books is somehow a stress reliever...well, for me. ^^
I couldn\'t remember the last time I read a book. hahaha
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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I was supposed to watch the movie that you recommended, but I wasn\'t unable to watch it because my husband used the computer the whole day.
>> I was supposed to watch the movie that you recommended, but I wasn\'t able to watch it because my husband used the computer the whole day.
He is preparing an exam these days so he had to take a class on the internet using our holiday at home.
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In this situation, I also couldn\'t take a rest to the fullest so I read books silently.
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Well, I felt like I was at the library. Hahaha!
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Maybe, this kind of situation will last for quite some time.
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I hope he can pass the exam without any difficulties.
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By the way, we talked about the president Park and we didn\'t make a conversation about the president Duterte.
>> By the way, we talked about president Park and we didn\'t make a conversation about president Duterte.
Let\'s talk about him today! ^^
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See you soon!
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