Composition

2017-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! I was supposed to watch the movie that you recommended, but I wasn't unable to watch it because my husband used the computer the whole day. He is preparing an exam these days so he had to take a class on the internet using our holiday at home. In this situation, I also couldn't take a rest to the fullest so I read books silently. Well, I felt like I was at the library. Hahaha! Maybe, this kind of situation will last for quite some time. I hope he can pass the exam without any difficulties. By the way, we talked about the president Park and we didn't make a conversation about the president Duterte. Let's talk about him today! ^^ See you soon!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Good afternoon too!

Actually, you had a relaxing holiday.

Reading books is somehow a stress reliever...well, for me. ^^

I couldn\'t remember the last time I read a book. hahaha

See you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> Correct
 I was supposed to watch the movie that you recommended, but I wasn\'t unable to watch it because my husband used the computer the whole day. 

>>  I was supposed to watch the movie that you recommended, but I wasn\'t able to watch it because my husband used the computer the whole day. 
 He is preparing an exam these days so he had to take a class on the internet using our holiday at home.

>> Correct
 In this situation, I also couldn\'t take a rest to the fullest so I read books silently. 

>> Correct
 Well, I felt like I was at the library. Hahaha!

>> Correct
 Maybe, this kind of situation will last for quite some time. 

>> Correct
 I hope he can pass the exam without any difficulties. 

>> Correct
 By the way, we talked about the president Park and we didn\'t make a conversation about the president Duterte.

>>  By the way, we talked about president Park and we didn\'t make a conversation about president Duterte.
 Let\'s talk about him today! ^^

>> Correct
 See you soon!

>> Correct

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