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2017-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher! Yesterday, you recommended the book entitled 'If tomorrow comes'. I was successful in searching it, but I didn't find where I can get this book. Maybe, I need to go to the biggest library and search it again. Somehow, it really seems like interesting. By the way, we talked about President Park and Duterte for two days and I think it was not only interesting but also difficult to express my opinion in English. It was a difficult topic for me. Today is Friday, let's talk about an easier thing like 'exercise'! ^^** See you then!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

You\'re right! When it comes to politics there are terminologies that are difficult to understand and express.

Anyway, you actually have a good skill in delivering your opinions.

Let\'s talk about exercise later. ^^

I\'m longing to exercise again the way I did before.

See you!

_Teacher Dianne ^__^

Good afternoon, teacher!

>> correct
Yesterday, you recommended the book entitled \'If tomorrow comes\'.

>> correct
I was successful in searching it, but I didn\'t find where I can get this book.

>> correct
Maybe, I need to go to the biggest library and search it again.

>> correct
Somehow, it really seems like interesting.

>> correct
By the way, we talked about President Park and Duterte for two days and I think it was not only interesting but also difficult to express my opinion in English.

>> correct
It was a difficult topic for me.

>> correct
Today is Friday, let\'s talk about an easier thing like \'exercise\'! ^^**

>> correct
See you then!

>> correct

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