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2017-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! It is Monday again! Indeed, time on the weekend flew so fast. I wish I could only go to work for 4 days. Hehehe! By the way, last Friday, I took my class on hold so we didn't talk about the topic 'work out'. Let's talk about it in our today's class! ^^ I will share the story why I put importance on 'exercise'. See you very soon! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Oh my! I\'m excited about why you put importance on exercise.

Everyone needs to exercise, but some people are lazy to do it and I\'m of them. hehe

Let\'s talk about your story later. ^^

See you!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> Correct
 It is Monday again!

>> Correct
 Indeed, time on the weekend flew so fast. 

>> Correct 
I wish I could only go to work for 4 days. Hehehe!

>> Correct
 By the way, last Friday, I took my class on hold so we didn\'t talk about the topic \'work out\'.

>> Correct
 Let\'s talk about it in our today\'s class! ^^

>> Correct

>> Or: Let\'s talk about it in our class today.
 I will share the story why I put importance on \'exercise\'. 

>> Correct 

>> Or: I will share the story about why I give importance to exercise.
 See you very soon! ^^

>> Correct

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