Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Oh my! I\'m excited about why you put importance on exercise.
Everyone needs to exercise, but some people are lazy to do it and I\'m of them. hehe
Let\'s talk about your story later. ^^
See you!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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It is Monday again!
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Indeed, time on the weekend flew so fast.
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I wish I could only go to work for 4 days. Hehehe!
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By the way, last Friday, I took my class on hold so we didn\'t talk about the topic \'work out\'.
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Let\'s talk about it in our today\'s class! ^^
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>> Or: Let\'s talk about it in our class today.
I will share the story why I put importance on \'exercise\'.
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>> Or: I will share the story about why I give importance to exercise.
See you very soon! ^^
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