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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear all,
Good morning!
I had a happy time too.
I couldn't forgot that you eatting spicy food . It was very impressive.
If we can have time for together in the future , we will pleased spend time with you.
Bye Bye
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear Bella. Thank you for your composition today. Kindly check the corrections that I made. Have a nice day!
Dear all,
>> Dear everyone,
Good morning!
>> Correct.
I had a happy time too.
>> I had a happy time, too.
I couldn't forgot that you eatting spicy food.
>> I can't forget that you love to eat spicy foods.
It was very impressive.
>>Correct.
If we can have time for together in the future , we will pleased spend time with you.
>> If we can have time together in the future, I would be pleased to spend time with you.
Bye Bye
>>Bye.
>> Goodbye.
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