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Hi, [이름]!

I totally agree with you.

We can exercise in simple ways like stretching and climbing the stairs. ^^

Let\'s talk about your suggested topic later. ^^

See you!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

Good morning, teacher!

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 We talked about \'exercise\' yesterday and it is one of the important factors that increase our life quality. 

>> We talked about \'exercise\' yesterday and it is one of the important factors that increases our life\'s quality. 

>> Or: We talked about \'exercise\' yesterday and it is a great factor that increases the quality of life. 
 People today tend not to have much spare time to work out so it naturally leads them to lose their health. 

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 However, I think it is an excuse.

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 We can work out during our daily life if we put our mind to it. 

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 1. Don\'t use an elevator and escalator when you go upstairs!

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>> Or: 1. Don\'t use an elevator or an escalator when you go upstairs!
 2. Stretch out when you are sitting!

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 3. Sit upright!

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 If we just follow these rules, we could get a healthier body. 

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 At the least, we can keep our body in shape. 

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Let\'s talk about \'How to work out?\' today! ^^

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 See you later!

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