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2017-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon,teacher! Yesterday, we talked about exercise, but suddenly slipped away from the main topic. However, it was the time that I could solve my curiosity. As an extension of our class, I not only do squatting, but also lift dumbbells. Actually, working out regularly is very annoying so sometimes, I want to give up. However, if I imagine that I am in the hospital due to lack of exercise, I will be frustrated and regretful about why I didn't keep my health thru exercise before. I really hate going to the hospital. Hehehe ^^:; Anyway, let's talk about food habit! ^^ See you soon! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Good afternoon too!

How\'s your hump day?

Well, yesterday was your chance to ask some questions and I hope you\'re satisfied with my answers. hehehe

Anyway, let\'s talk about food habit later. It\'s interesting to me. ^^

See you!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Good afternoon,teacher!

>> Good afternoon, teacher! (just the space)
 Yesterday, we talked about exercise, but suddenly slipped away from the main topic. 

>> correct 
However, it was the time that I could solve my curiosity. 

>> correct  (I do understand ^^)
 As an extension of our class, I not only do squatting, but also lift dumbbells.

>> Correct

>> Or: As an extension of our class, I don\'t only do squatting, but I also lift dumbbells.
 Actually, working out regularly is very annoying so sometimes, I want to give up. 

>> Correct
 However, if I imagine that I am in the hospital due to lack of exercise, I will be frustrated and regretful about why I didn\'t keep my health thru exercise before. 

>> Correct  
I really hate going to the hospital. Hehehe ^^:;

>> Correct
 Anyway, let\'s talk about food habit! ^^

>> Correct
 See you soon! ^^**

>> Correct

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