Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Good afternoon too!
How\'s your hump day?
Well, yesterday was your chance to ask some questions and I hope you\'re satisfied with my answers. hehehe
Anyway, let\'s talk about food habit later. It\'s interesting to me. ^^
See you!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Good afternoon,teacher!
>> Good afternoon, teacher! (just the space)
Yesterday, we talked about exercise, but suddenly slipped away from the main topic.
>> correct
However, it was the time that I could solve my curiosity.
>> correct (I do understand ^^)
As an extension of our class, I not only do squatting, but also lift dumbbells.
>> Correct
>> Or: As an extension of our class, I don\'t only do squatting, but I also lift dumbbells.
Actually, working out regularly is very annoying so sometimes, I want to give up.
>> Correct
However, if I imagine that I am in the hospital due to lack of exercise, I will be frustrated and regretful about why I didn\'t keep my health thru exercise before.
>> Correct
I really hate going to the hospital. Hehehe ^^:;
>> Correct
Anyway, let\'s talk about food habit! ^^
>> Correct
See you soon! ^^**
>> Correct
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