Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Happy Thursday too!
Oh my! Food is one of my guilty pleasures.
I\'ll share about it later. ^^
I think I had food poisoning last week. hahaha
Anyway, I\'ve learned my lesson.
I hope I could do what you\'re doing to be healthy.
And I hope to have the discipline that you have when it comes to eating.
See you!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Good morning, teacher!
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A happy Thursday to you!
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Yesterday, we talked about \'food habit\' and it was interesting.
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However, we didn\'t have enough time to share your habit so I\'d like to suggest the same topic for today\'s class.
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Additionally, we can also talk about our favorite foods too.
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When it comes to talking about foods, it might make us feel hard because our class time is right before the dinner hour.
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>> Or: It might be hard for us to talk about foods because our class is right before the dinner time.
Well, I might be drooling during our conversation. ^^
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For me, eating foods is one of the pleasure of my life.
>> For me, eating foods is one of the pleasures of my life.
>> Or: For me, eating foods is one pleasure in my life.
However, it sometimes gives a hard time to me, like food poisoning.
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>> Or: However, sometimes it gives me a hard time because of food poisoning.
How about you?
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Let me know more about your attitude to eating! ^^**
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>> Or: Let me know more about your attitude toward eating! ^^**
See you very soon!
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