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2017-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good morning, teacher! A happy Thursday to you! Yesterday, we talked about 'food habit' and it was interesting. However, we didn't have enough time to share your habit so I'd like to suggest the same topic for today's class. Additionally, we can also talk about our favorite foods too. When it comes to talking about foods, it might make us feel hard because our class time is right before the dinner hour. Well, I might be drooling during our conversation. ^^ For me, eating foods is one of the pleasure of my life. However, it sometimes gives a hard time to me, like food poisoning. How about you? Let me know more about your attitude to eating! ^^** See you very soon!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Happy Thursday too!

Oh my! Food is one of my guilty pleasures.

I\'ll share about it later. ^^

I think I had food poisoning last week. hahaha

Anyway, I\'ve learned my lesson.

I hope I could do what you\'re doing to be healthy.

And I hope to have the discipline that you have when it comes to eating.

See you!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Good morning, teacher!

>> Correct
 A happy Thursday to you! 

>> Correct
 Yesterday, we talked about \'food habit\' and it was interesting. 

>> Correct
 However, we didn\'t have enough time to share your habit so I\'d like to suggest the same topic for today\'s class. 

>> Correct
 Additionally, we can also talk about our favorite foods too. 

>> Correct 
When it comes to talking about foods, it might make us feel hard because our class time is right before the dinner hour.

>> Correct

>> Or: It might be hard for us to talk about foods because our class is right before the dinner time.

 Well, I might be drooling during our conversation. ^^

>> Correct (hahaha same here and I could imagine us drooling)
 For me, eating foods is one of the pleasure of my life.

>>  For me, eating foods is one of the pleasures of my life.

>> Or:  For me, eating foods is one pleasure in my life.
 However, it sometimes gives a hard time to me, like food poisoning. 

>> Correct

>> Or: However, sometimes it gives me a hard time because of food poisoning.
 How about you?

>> Correct
 Let me know more about your attitude to eating! ^^**

>> Correct

>> Or:  Let me know more about your attitude toward eating! ^^**
 See you very soon!

>> Correct

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