Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I think, many Koreans are rejoicing or celebrating now.
You have achieved what you\'ve been wanting.
I\'m happy for you too ^^ and I\'m wishing that your country will get back the good reputation it had before.
See you!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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It is a historical day to Korea today.
>> It is a historical day for Korea today.
She is not our President any more.
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I don\'t know how to express my happiness.
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I watched \'the impeachment sentence\' on TV in real time, which was cliff-hanging.
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As soon as I heard the result, I was finally able to take a breath and thought that our country will have a bright future.
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Her impeachment is a strong desire that 8 out of 10 people have wanted.
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Well, I really want to say \'Great job! Good work!\' to 80% of people.
>> Well, I really want to say \'Great job! or Good work!\' to 80% of the people.
However, it is the start to fix the confusing political situation to the right thing.
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>> Or: However, it is the time to start fixing the confusing political situation to be upright .
That is all for today and see you soon! ^^
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P.S.: Let\'s talk about \'table manners! ^^**
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