Composition

2017-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher! It is a historical day to Korea today. She is not our President any more. I don't know how to express my happiness. I watched 'the impeachment sentence' on TV in real time, which was cliff-hanging. As soon as I heard the result, I was finally able to take a breath and thought that our country will have a bright future. Her impeachment is a strong desire that 8 out of 10 people have wanted. Well, I really want to say 'Great job! Good work!' to 80% of people. However, it is the start to fix the confusing political situation to the right thing. That is all for today and see you soon! ^^ P.S.: Let's talk about 'table manners'! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I think, many Koreans are rejoicing or celebrating now.

You have achieved what you\'ve been wanting.

I\'m happy for you too  ^^ and I\'m wishing that your country will get  back the good reputation it had before.

See you!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> Correct
 It is a historical day to Korea today.

>>  It is a historical day for Korea today.
 She is not our President any more. 

>> Correct
 I don\'t know how to express my happiness. 

>> Correct
 I watched \'the impeachment sentence\' on TV in real time, which was cliff-hanging.

>> Correct 
 As soon as I heard the result, I was finally able to take a breath and thought that our country will have a bright future. 

>> Correct  
Her impeachment is a strong desire that 8 out of 10 people have wanted. 

>> Correct 
 Well, I really want to say \'Great job! Good work!\' to 80% of people. 

>>  Well, I really want to say \'Great job! or Good work!\' to 80% of the people. 
 However, it is the start to fix the confusing political situation to the right thing. 

>> correct

>> Or: However, it is the time to start fixing the confusing political situation to be upright .
 That is all for today and see you soon! ^^

>> correct
 P.S.: Let\'s talk about \'table manners! ^^**

>> correct

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