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2017-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good morning, teacher! A happy Monday to you! We talked about 'table manners' in our last class. I am going to explain more about the table manners that have to be kept in Korea. 1. Don't talk with mouth full. 2. Don't smack and slurp when eating. 3. Don't blow nose during having meal. 4. Don't stick out your tongue when bringing foods to your mouth . 5. Don't hit bowls with a spoon and chopsticks and make noise. Maybe, some of them are the same with yours there and I think they would be typical manners everywhere. Anyway, I'd like to suggest a topic, which is about 'smoking' today. See you later! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


A happy Monday to you as well. ^^

Yes, most of them are also to be kept here in the Philippines.

Nowadays, people tend to forget about their table manners.

In my case I\'m trying to remember them...all. ^^

Let\'s talk about smoking later.

See you. ^___^


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Good morning, teacher! 

>> Correct
 A happy Monday to you! 

>> Correct
 We talked about \'table manners\' in our last class. 

>> Correct
 I am going to explain more about the table manners that have to be kept in Korea. 

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 1. Don\'t talk with mouth full.

>> Correct
 2. Don\'t smack and slurp when eating. 

>> Correct
 3. Don\'t blow nose during having meal. 

>> Don\'t blow nose during having a meal. 
 4. Don\'t stick out your tongue when bringing foods to your mouth. 

>> Correct
 5. Don\'t hit bowls with a spoon and chopsticks and make noise. 

>> Correct
Maybe, some of them are the same with yours there and I think they would be typical manners everywhere. 

>> Correct
 Anyway, I\'d like to suggest a topic, which is about \'smoking\' today. 

>> Correct
 See you later! ^^**

>> Correct

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