Composition

2017-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher! A happy Thursday to you! We talked about 'drinking alcohol' yesterday. It seemed like both of us are not good at drinking. However, your drinking capacity seems like stronger than mine. Sometimes, I think that I wish I could drink a lot so that I don't feel bored when I am with heavy drinkers. Here in Korea, drinking alcohol well is an advantage for people to socialize with each other easier and faster. I have been really envious of people who enjoy drinking alcohol to the fullest. I think I don't have a gene that resolves alcohol with me so I always feel dizzy and pain in my body after drinking. If someone is like that, it had better not to drink as much as possible because alcohol only will give a bad effect to him or her. However, taking a sip of beer would give a positive function to our metabolism. Let's take more about 'alcohol culture' later! ^^ See you soon! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


A happy Thursday as well!

I hope there\'s something special about your day. ^^

For me there\'s none, but I\'m still looking forward to having a good night.

See you later! ^^


_Teacher Dianne ^____^


Good afternoon, teacher!

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 A happy Thursday to you! 

>> correct
 We talked about \'drinking alcohol\' yesterday.

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 It seemed like both of us are not good at drinking. 

>> correct
 However, your drinking capacity seems like stronger than mine. 

>> correct
 Sometimes, I think that I wish I could drink a lot so that I don\'t feel bored when I am with heavy drinkers. 

>> correct
 Here in Korea, drinking alcohol well is an advantage for people to socialize with each other easier and faster. 

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 I have been really envious of people who enjoy drinking alcohol to the fullest.

>> correct
 I think I don\'t have a gene that resolves alcohol with me so I always feel dizzy and pain in my body after drinking.

>> correct
 If someone is like that, it had better not to drink as much as possible because alcohol only will give a bad effect to him or her. 

>>  If someone is like that, it would be better not to drink as much as possible because alcohol will only give a bad effect to him or her. 
 However, taking a sip of beer would give a positive function to our metabolism. 

>> correct
 Let\'s take more about \'alcohol culture\' later! ^^

>> correct
 See you soon! ^^**

>> correct 

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