Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
A happy Thursday as well!
I hope there\'s something special about your day. ^^
For me there\'s none, but I\'m still looking forward to having a good night.
See you later! ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^____^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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A happy Thursday to you!
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We talked about \'drinking alcohol\' yesterday.
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It seemed like both of us are not good at drinking.
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However, your drinking capacity seems like stronger than mine.
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Sometimes, I think that I wish I could drink a lot so that I don\'t feel bored when I am with heavy drinkers.
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Here in Korea, drinking alcohol well is an advantage for people to socialize with each other easier and faster.
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I have been really envious of people who enjoy drinking alcohol to the fullest.
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I think I don\'t have a gene that resolves alcohol with me so I always feel dizzy and pain in my body after drinking.
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If someone is like that, it had better not to drink as much as possible because alcohol only will give a bad effect to him or her.
>> If someone is like that, it would be better not to drink as much as possible because alcohol will only give a bad effect to him or her.
However, taking a sip of beer would give a positive function to our metabolism.
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Let\'s take more about \'alcohol culture\' later! ^^
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See you soon! ^^**
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