Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
While reading your composition, I was smiling, or should I say laughing. haha
You\'re right! The one you shared is interesting.
I agree with that.
Most fathers want to know the identity of their future son-in-law that\'s why they\'re doing that.
That also happens here. hahaha
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne
Good morning, teacher!
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An awesome Friday to you!
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Time flies so fast!
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Even if I don\'t have a plan for the weekend, I am just happy about the fact that the weekend is coming.
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I think you also have the same feeling with me. ^^
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By the way, we talked about \'alcohol\' for two days and I\'d like to ask you to check if the sentences below are correct or used frequently in daily life.
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1. I usually take a sip of beer.
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2. I drank so much last night so passed out.
>> I drank so much last night that I passed out.
3. Beer\'s strength is not that strong.
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4. It is my capacity to drink one bottle of beer.
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>> Or: I can only drink a bottle of beer.
5. Beer is 4 proof.
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6. I drank it out of the can.
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>> Or: I drank it from the can.
I am going to share more about our \'alcohol culture\'.
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There is a term like \'Drunken Truth\'.
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We tend to drink alcohol with someone who we want to judge or socialize in a short time.
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People believe that they can see the true identity of someone thru drunkenness.
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As an example, there is a girl who is soon to be married.
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Her father wants to know the groom who is soon to be her husband.
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Before marrying her to him, her father intentionally makes him drunk to see his \'Drunken Truth\'.
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It is one way to verify if the future son-in law has right mind.
>> It is one way to verify if the future son-in law is in his right mind despite being drunk.
It is an interesting way, but I think this way is really useful to judge someone’s true face.
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That is all for toady and see you soon!
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Let’s talk about ‘advantages and disadvantages of drinking coffee’ today! ^^**
>> Let’s talk about the ‘advantages and disadvantages of drinking coffee’ today! ^^** (The article \"the\" can be used to stress a word or to be more specific.)
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