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2017-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! Did you have a fun time last weekend? I can seem to guess what you did. ^^;; In my case, I met one of my friends from another city. It has been a long time since I met her last time so I had a pleasant time with her. By the way, I apologize to you for the disturbance during our last class. I often order ingredients from markets and I fixed the delivery time between PM 7 to PM 10 on Friday. I didn't imagine that the delivery man came so early. I should have fixed the delivery date on weekend. It won't happen in the future any more. ^^;; By the way, I think we still have a lot of words about 'coffee'. Let's talk more about 'Coffee Culture' today! See you soon! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Good afternoon too!

About last Friday, don\'t worry about it, I understand. ^^

It\'s great to know you had a pleasant time meeting your friend.

I think you already know what I did last weekend. haha

Let\'s talk more about coffee later!

See you! ^^


_Teacher Dianne


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> correct
 Did you have a fun time last weekend?

>> correct

>> Or: Did you have fun last weekend?
 I can seem to guess what you did. ^^;;

>> correct

>> Or: I think, I have an idea what you did.
 In my case, I met one of my friends from another city.

>> correct
 It has been a long time since I met her last time so I had a pleasant time with her. 

 >> correct
By the way, I apologize to you for the disturbance during our last class. 

>> correct
 I often order ingredients from markets and I fixed the delivery time between PM 7 to PM 10 on Friday.

>>  I often order ingredients from markets and I fixed the delivery time between 7 PM to 10 PM on Friday.
 I didn\'t imagine that the delivery man came so early. 

>> correct
 I should have fixed the delivery date on weekend. 

>>  I should have fixed the delivery date on the weekend. 
 It won\'t happen in the future any more. ^^;;

>> correct
 By the way, I think we still have a lot of words about \'coffee\'.

>> correct
 Let\'s talk more about \'Coffee Culture\' today!

>> correct
 See you soon! ^^**

>> correct

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