Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Good afternoon too!
About last Friday, don\'t worry about it, I understand. ^^
It\'s great to know you had a pleasant time meeting your friend.
I think you already know what I did last weekend. haha
Let\'s talk more about coffee later!
See you! ^^
_Teacher Dianne
Good afternoon, teacher!
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Did you have a fun time last weekend?
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>> Or: Did you have fun last weekend?
I can seem to guess what you did. ^^;;
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>> Or: I think, I have an idea what you did.
In my case, I met one of my friends from another city.
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It has been a long time since I met her last time so I had a pleasant time with her.
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By the way, I apologize to you for the disturbance during our last class.
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I often order ingredients from markets and I fixed the delivery time between PM 7 to PM 10 on Friday.
>> I often order ingredients from markets and I fixed the delivery time between 7 PM to 10 PM on Friday.
I didn\'t imagine that the delivery man came so early.
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I should have fixed the delivery date on weekend.
>> I should have fixed the delivery date on the weekend.
It won\'t happen in the future any more. ^^;;
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By the way, I think we still have a lot of words about \'coffee\'.
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Let\'s talk more about \'Coffee Culture\' today!
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See you soon! ^^**
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