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Hi, [이름]!

Good afternoon as well!

Yellow dust, indeed is a serious problem of your country.

It\'s becoming worse so I think they have to do something about it.

But in the meantime, protect yourself from it.

See you later!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

Good afternoon, teacher!

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 Yellow dust from China is attacking us now so I can\'t go out without wearing a mask.

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 Originally, we can see the blue sky in this season, but we have lost the chance to see it. 

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 I really regent our government and China for not resolving this terrible problem. 

>>  I really blame our government and China for not resolving this terrible problem. 

(The word regent is a noun or an adjective, I think we need a verb in the sentence)
 I am going to eat some foods that are good for my lung.--;; 

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>> Or: I will eat some foods that are good for my lungs.
 By the way, we talked about \'coffee\' and both of us enjoyed the talk yesterday. 

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Aside from what we already talked, I\'d like to tell you more about the coffee. 

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 Nowadays, disposable cups have been become a serious social issue.

>> Nowadays, disposable cups have become a serious social issue.

>> Or: Nowadays, disposable cups have been becoming a serious social issue.

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It is not only waste of resources, but also leads to environmental pollution. 

>> It is not only the waste of resources, but also it leads to environmental pollution. 
 To reduce consumption of the disposable cup, a few coffee shops conduct a campaign like giving a discount on coffee if customers bring their own tumbler.

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 I also like drinking hot coffee in a tumbler with having a function of warmth.

>> I also like drinking hot coffee in a tumbler by having a function of warmth. 

>> Or: I also like drinking hot coffee in a tumbler with its function of making it warm.
 I hope this kind of culture can be established everywhere. 

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 That is all for today and see you later! ^^**

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 P.S.: Let\'s talk about \'Go camping\'! ^^~

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