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2017-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher! Yesterday, we talked about 'Go camping' and I found that you also like it, even fishing as well. Indeed, those are attractive activities. It is a camping season in Korea and it has begun to book a site on the internet. Even if the cost is not that cheap at a charged camping ground, it is more convenient to stay because there is everything like bathrooms, shower booths, kitchens, convenient stores and so on. I am planning to go camping with my husband after he passes his exam. Hehehe ^^;; I must support him in preparing the exam so that he can get a good result. That is all for toady and see you soon! ^^~ P.S.: Let's talk about a specific episode during camping! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Good afternoon to you!

How\'s your day so far?

Camping is a fun activity which I failed to do for several years now. haha

I could barely remember the last time I went camping.

See you later! ^^


_Teacher Dianne 


Good afternoon, teacher! 

>> correct
 Yesterday, we talked about \'Go camping\' and I found that you also like it, even fishing as well. 

>> correct
 Indeed, those are attractive activities. 

>> correct
 It is a camping season in Korea and it has begun to book a site on the internet. 

>>  It is the camping season in Korea and the people have begun to book a site on the internet. 
 Even if the cost is not that cheap at a charged camping ground, it is more convenient to stay because there is everything like bathrooms, shower booths, kitchens, convenient stores and so on. 

>> Even if the cost of the charged camping site is not that cheap, it is more convenient to stay at the site because everything is there like the bathrooms, shower booths, kitchens, convenient stores, and so on.  
 I am planning to go camping with my husband after he passes his exam. Hehehe ^^;;

>> correct (Great idea! You might want to surprise him.)
 I must support him in preparing the exam so that he can get a good result.

>> correct
 That is all for toady and see you soon! ^^~

>> correct
 P.S.: Let\'s talk about a specific episode during camping! ^^

>> correct

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