Composition

2017-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher! Please help me check if the sentences below are correct. *We drove downhill near the sea. *Our car could not go uphill. *Our car didn't be towed by the small four-wheel-drive vehicle. *He took us to the camping ground with his car. *We had to carry out our camping equipment. *The day before, an earthquake happened. *Entrance into the mountain was restricted because of the earthquake. It is time for you to share your camping episode today. ^^ See you later! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Oh my!

I think, I can\'t share much about camping because the last time I went camping was when I was a student. hahaha

And I barely remember that, but I\'ll try my best to remember the activities we did. ^^

You know this is the effect of aging. haha

See you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^__^


Good afternoon, teacher! 

>> Correct
 Please help me check if the sentences below are correct.
>> Correct
*We drove downhill near the sea. 

>> Correct
 *Our car could not go uphill.

>> Correct
*Our car didn\'t be towed by the small four-wheel-drive vehicle. 

>> Our car couldn\'t be towed by the small four-wheel-drive vehicle.
 *He took us to the camping ground with his car.

>> Correct

>> Or: He drove us to the camping site using his car.
 *We had to carry out our camping equipment. 

>> Correct
 *The day before, an earthquake happened. 

>> Correct

>> Or: There was an earthquake the day before the camping.
 *Entrance into the mountain was restricted because of the earthquake.
>> The entrance into the mountain was restricted because of the earthquake. 

It is time for you to share your camping episode today. ^^

>> Correct
 See you later! ^^**

>> Correct

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