Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Oh my!
I think, I can\'t share much about camping because the last time I went camping was when I was a student. hahaha
And I barely remember that, but I\'ll try my best to remember the activities we did. ^^
You know this is the effect of aging. haha
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^__^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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Please help me check if the sentences below are correct.
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*We drove downhill near the sea.
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*Our car could not go uphill.
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*Our car didn\'t be towed by the small four-wheel-drive vehicle.
>> Our car couldn\'t be towed by the small four-wheel-drive vehicle.
*He took us to the camping ground with his car.
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>> Or: He drove us to the camping site using his car.
*We had to carry out our camping equipment.
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*The day before, an earthquake happened.
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>> Or: There was an earthquake the day before the camping.
*Entrance into the mountain was restricted because of the earthquake.
>> The entrance into the mountain was restricted because of the earthquake.
It is time for you to share your camping episode today. ^^
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See you later! ^^**
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