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2017-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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A Happy Friday to you, teacher! I bought a book that I wanted to read and it will be delivered to me tomorrow. Reading the book is my weekend plan. ^^ I hope you can also have a special plan on the weekend instead of that you used to do before. ^^** By the way, thanks for sharing your camping episode and activity in the Girl Scout. Even if it is a sad thing that you rarely remember them, you would do ‘First-aid’ successfully when you encounter the situation that someone needs your help in an emergency situation. Of course, it is the best not to happen this kind of bad situation. ^^;; That is all for today and let's talk about ‘Shopping!’ since it is Friday! *^^* See you very soon!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


An awesome and a happy Friday to you!

Well, let\'s make the most out of this day. ^^

You\'re always welcome my dear.  ^_^

Oh my! Shopping! I think you have a lot to share about this topic. ^-^

See you later!

 

_Teacher Dianne ^^


A Happy Friday to you, teacher! 

>> correct


I bought a book that I wanted to read and it will be delivered to me tomorrow. 

>> correct
 Reading the book is my weekend plan. ^^

>> correct
 I hope you can also have a special plan on the weekend instead of that you used to do before. ^^**

>> correct
 By the way, thanks for sharing your camping episode and activity in the Girl Scout. 

>>  By the way, thanks for sharing your camping episodes and activities during the Girl Scout. 
 Even if it is a sad thing that you rarely remember them, you would do ‘First-aid’ successfully when you encounter the situation that someone needs your help in an emergency situation. 

>>  Even if it is a sad thing that you rarely remember them, you would do ‘First-aid’ successfully when you encounter a situation wherein someone needs your help in an emergency situation. 
 Of course, it is the best not to happen this kind of bad situation. ^^;; 

>>  Of course, it is the best for this kind of a bad situation not to happen. 
That is all for today and let\'s talk about ‘Shopping!’ since it is Friday! *^^* 

>> correct
 See you very soon!

>> correct

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