Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
An awesome and a happy Friday to you!
Well, let\'s make the most out of this day. ^^
You\'re always welcome my dear. ^_^
Oh my! Shopping! I think you have a lot to share about this topic. ^-^
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
A Happy Friday to you, teacher!
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I bought a book that I wanted to read and it will be delivered to me tomorrow.
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Reading the book is my weekend plan. ^^
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I hope you can also have a special plan on the weekend instead of that you used to do before. ^^**
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By the way, thanks for sharing your camping episode and activity in the Girl Scout.
>> By the way, thanks for sharing your camping episodes and activities during the Girl Scout.
Even if it is a sad thing that you rarely remember them, you would do ‘First-aid’ successfully when you encounter the situation that someone needs your help in an emergency situation.
>> Even if it is a sad thing that you rarely remember them, you would do ‘First-aid’ successfully when you encounter a situation wherein someone needs your help in an emergency situation.
Of course, it is the best not to happen this kind of bad situation. ^^;;
>> Of course, it is the best for this kind of a bad situation not to happen.
That is all for today and let\'s talk about ‘Shopping!’ since it is Friday! *^^*
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See you very soon!
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