Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
A pleasant Monday to you!
Well, let\'s kick off the negative feeling today.
Coffee makes our day more interesting and it keeps us motivated. ^^
Enjoy having coffee!
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good morning, teacher!
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A happy Monday to you!
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It is a gloomy day today so it makes me feel down.
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In order for me to remove this bad feeling, I am drinking a cup of Cafe latte.
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>> Or: I am drinking a cup of cafe latte to take away this bad feeling.
It will be my comforting beverage. ^^
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By the way, we talked about the benefits of Online Shopping last Friday.
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Indeed, there are a lot of benefits that we can enjoy.
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Today, let\'s talk about \'Advantages and disadvantages of credit card\'.
>> Today, let\'s talk about the \'Advantages and disadvantages of credit card\'.
See you later! ^^**
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