Composition

2017-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, teacher! A happy Monday to you! It is a gloomy day today so it makes me feel down. In order for me to remove this bad feeling, I am drinking a cup of Cafe latte. It will be my comforting beverage. ^^ By the way, we talked about the benefits of Online Shopping last Friday. Indeed, there are a lot of benefits that we can enjoy. Today, let's talk about 'Advantages and disadvantages of credit card'. See you later! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


A pleasant Monday to you!

Well, let\'s kick off the negative feeling today.

Coffee makes our day more interesting and it keeps us motivated. ^^

Enjoy having coffee!

See you later! 


_Teacher Dianne ^^

 

Good morning, teacher!

>> correct
 A happy Monday to you! 

>> correct
 It is a gloomy day today so it makes me feel down. 

>> correct
 In order for me to remove this bad feeling, I am drinking a cup of Cafe latte. 

>> correct

>> Or: I am drinking a cup of cafe latte to take away this bad feeling.
 It will be my comforting beverage. ^^

>> correct
 By the way, we talked about the benefits of Online Shopping last Friday. 

>> correct
 Indeed, there are a lot of benefits that we can enjoy. 

>> correct
 Today, let\'s talk about \'Advantages and disadvantages of credit card\'. 

>>  Today, let\'s talk about the \'Advantages and disadvantages of credit card\'. 
 See you later! ^^**

>> correct

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