Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Good afternoon to you and Happy Friday!
Maybe, it\'s about Engel\'s law why your bank account is empty. ^^
It\'s really hard to budget especially if your income is not enough to support yourself.
Planning will be a great help and knowing how to manage your expenses.
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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The spring rain is falling now.
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This rain will push the spring coming earlier.
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>> Or: This rain means spring is approaching earlier.
By the way, we talked about the \'living expenses\' for two days.
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In comparison to other people, my living expenses is not that high because I don\'t usually spend money only for me.
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Moreover, I don\'t drink alcohol and smoke so I don\'t need to allot money for myself.
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However, I don\'t know why my bank account is always empty. ^^;;
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Maybe, the high Engel coefficient would be one of the reasons why I am not comfortable.
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Salaries are staying the same but, the price for everything is going up.
>> Salaries are staying the same, but the price of everything is going up.
>> Or: Salaries stay the same, but the price of everything is increasing.
In the same vein, let\'s talk about \'Are you contented with your current life?\'!
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See you very soon! ^^
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