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2017-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! It seems like it is Monday today to me. Did you have a funny time last weekend? I enjoyed well for the past 3 days and I will share it to you soon. See you later and let's keep on talking about 'Are you contented with your current life?'! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

How have you been?

I had fun last weekend because I attended a Thanksgiving party.

So it means I ate different kinds of foods and I think I gained weight in just a day. ^^

I\'m excited to know about your weekend. ^__^

See you later!

_Teacher Dianne ^_^

Good afternoon, teacher!

>> correct
It seems like it is Monday today to me.

>> correct
Did you have a funny time last weekend?

>> correct

>> Or: Did you have fun last weekend?
I enjoyed well for the past 3 days and I will share it to you soon.

>> correct
See you later and let\'s keep on talking about \'Are you contented with ayour current life?\'! ^^**

>> See you later and let\'s keep on talking about \'Are you contented with your current life?\'! ^^**

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