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2017-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! It is raining now here. How about there? I feel uncomfortable when it rains. It proves that I became more and more insensitive as I get older. Hehehe ^^;; Let's talk more about it during our class. For today's topic, I'd like to recommend 'Do you think it is possible to have a best friend of the opposite sex without becoming a girlfriend or boyfriend?'. See you later! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


How are you on a rainy day?

It is sunny in our city today.

Well, in my case I tend to be more sensitive or emotional as I get older.

Maybe because of hormones. hahaha

See you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> correct
 It is raining now here. 

>> correct
 How about there? 

>> correct
 I feel uncomfortable when it rains. 

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 It proves that I became more and more insensitive as I get older. Hehehe ^^;;

>> correct

>> Or: It proves that as I get older, I become more sensitive. (same here hahaha)
 Let\'s talk more about it during our class. 

>> correct
 For today\'s topic, I\'d like to recommend \'Do you think it is possible to have a best friend of the opposite sex without becoming a girlfriend or boyfriend?\'.

>> correct
 See you later! ^^** \\

>> correct

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