Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
How are you on a rainy day?
It is sunny in our city today.
Well, in my case I tend to be more sensitive or emotional as I get older.
Maybe because of hormones. hahaha
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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It is raining now here.
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How about there?
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I feel uncomfortable when it rains.
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It proves that I became more and more insensitive as I get older. Hehehe ^^;;
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>> Or: It proves that as I get older, I become more sensitive. (same here hahaha)
Let\'s talk more about it during our class.
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For today\'s topic, I\'d like to recommend \'Do you think it is possible to have a best friend of the opposite sex without becoming a girlfriend or boyfriend?\'.
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See you later! ^^** \\
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