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2017-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! A happy Thursday to you! First, I'd like to suggest a topic of 'Which one do you prefer between a morning person and a night person?'. I am a morning person and prefer to be a morning person. Let's talk more about it later! By the way, when it comes to a friend of the opposite sex, I think it is possible to keep on having a relationship without any sexual feelings. Even I believe that they will be more friendly with each other. I also feel that way so I tend to put more importance on male friends than female friends as I get older. However, if a friend of the opposite sex has a special feeling towards me, I am not sure about what my next action would be. Maybe, I would keep my distance from the guy so that I don't spoil the relationship. Well, the relationship with the opposite sex seems like very sensitive and complicating. That is all for today and see you later! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Indeed, it is sensitive and complicated because of the friendship being built.

If you become a couple and all of a sudden things fall apart, you wouldn\'t know if you will still save the friendship that you started.

Anyway, when it comes to love, it will conquer all. ^^

See you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Good afternoon, teacher! 

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 A happy Thursday to you! 

>> correct
 First, I\'d like to suggest a topic of \'Which one do you prefer between a morning person and a night person?\'. 

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>> Or: First, I\'d like to suggest a topic about \'Which one do you prefer between a morning person and a night person?\'. 

>> Or: First, I\'d like to suggest the topic, \'Which one do you prefer between a morning person and a night person?\'. 
 I am a morning person and prefer to be a morning person.

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 Let\'s talk more about it later! 

>> correct
 By the way, when it comes to a friend of the opposite sex, I think it is possible to keep on having a relationship without any sexual feelings. 
 Even I believe that they will be more friendly with each other. 

 >> By the way, when it comes to a friend of the opposite sex, I think it is possible to keep on having a relationship without any sexual feelings and I even believe that they will be more friendly with each other.   
I also feel that way so I tend to put more importance on male friends than female friends as I get older. 

>> correct
 However, if a friend of the opposite sex has a special feeling towards me, I am not sure about what my next action would be. 

>> correct
 Maybe, I would keep my distance from the guy so that I don\'t spoil the relationship. 

>> correct
 Well, the relationship with the opposite sex seems like very sensitive and complicating.

>> correct

>> Or: Well, the relationship with the opposite sex seems like very sensitive and complicated.
 That is all for today and see you later! ^^**

>> correct

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