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Hi, [이름]!
Indeed, it is sensitive and complicated because of the friendship being built.
If you become a couple and all of a sudden things fall apart, you wouldn\'t know if you will still save the friendship that you started.
Anyway, when it comes to love, it will conquer all. ^^
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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A happy Thursday to you!
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First, I\'d like to suggest a topic of \'Which one do you prefer between a morning person and a night person?\'.
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>> Or: First, I\'d like to suggest a topic about \'Which one do you prefer between a morning person and a night person?\'.
>> Or: First, I\'d like to suggest the topic, \'Which one do you prefer between a morning person and a night person?\'.
I am a morning person and prefer to be a morning person.
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Let\'s talk more about it later!
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By the way, when it comes to a friend of the opposite sex, I think it is possible to keep on having a relationship without any sexual feelings.
Even I believe that they will be more friendly with each other.
>> By the way, when it comes to a friend of the opposite sex, I think it is possible to keep on having a relationship without any sexual feelings and I even believe that they will be more friendly with each other.
I also feel that way so I tend to put more importance on male friends than female friends as I get older.
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However, if a friend of the opposite sex has a special feeling towards me, I am not sure about what my next action would be.
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Maybe, I would keep my distance from the guy so that I don\'t spoil the relationship.
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Well, the relationship with the opposite sex seems like very sensitive and complicating.
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>> Or: Well, the relationship with the opposite sex seems like very sensitive and complicated.
That is all for today and see you later! ^^**
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