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2017-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, teacher! A happy Friday to you! Here in Korea, we can enjoy 'Cherry blossoms Festival' in this season, . Aside from cherry blossoms, the forsythia also bloomed early this year so it is giving a feeling of spring to people. Flowers never disappoint me. I am planning to go to Han river with a book tomorrow and take advantage of springtime. I hope the fine dust won't bother my feeling. ^^;; That is all for today and see you later! P.S.: I'd like to suggest a topic, 'Do you think it is a good idea to borrow money from a friend?'.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


A happy Friday to you!

It\'s nice to see the flowers blossoming in spring especially if you are with your special someone or loved one.

Unfortunately, we don\'t have it here.

I wish I could visit Korea. ^^

See you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Good morning, teacher!

>> correct
 A happy Friday to you!

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 Here in Korea, we can enjoy \'Cherry blossoms Festival\' in this season.

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 Aside from cherry blossoms, the forsythia also bloomed early this year so it is giving a feeling of spring to people. 

>> correct
 Flowers never disappoint me. 

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 I am planning to go to Han river with a book tomorrow and take advantage of springtime.

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 I hope the fine dust won\'t bother my feeling. ^^;;

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 That is all for today and see you later! 

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 P.S.: I\'d like to suggest a topic, \'Do you think it is a good idea to borrow money from a friend?\'.

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