Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
A happy Friday to you!
It\'s nice to see the flowers blossoming in spring especially if you are with your special someone or loved one.
Unfortunately, we don\'t have it here.
I wish I could visit Korea. ^^
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good morning, teacher!
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A happy Friday to you!
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Here in Korea, we can enjoy \'Cherry blossoms Festival\' in this season.
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Aside from cherry blossoms, the forsythia also bloomed early this year so it is giving a feeling of spring to people.
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Flowers never disappoint me.
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I am planning to go to Han river with a book tomorrow and take advantage of springtime.
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I hope the fine dust won\'t bother my feeling. ^^;;
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That is all for today and see you later!
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P.S.: I\'d like to suggest a topic, \'Do you think it is a good idea to borrow money from a friend?\'.
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