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2017-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! A happy Monday to you! I am happy because my boss is not in the office! I feel like I am waling on air. ^^;; How about you? Do you have a good mode today? I hope you will. Let's talk about the story on the weekend and a topic, which is about 'Superstition' today! ^^ See you very soon!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


A good Monday to you!

It\'s a happy Monday for me.

Hopefully, it will be until the end of the shift. haha

I hope you\'ll have a happy day until you get home. ^_^

See you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> correct
 A happy Monday to you!

>> correct
 I am happy because my boss is not in the office! 

>> correct
 I feel like I am waling on air. ^^;;

>>  I feel like I am walking on air. ^^;;
 How about you? 

>> correct
 Do you have a good mode today?

>> Do you have a good mood today?
 I hope you will. 

>> correct
 Let\'s talk about the story on the weekend and a topic, which is about \'Superstition\' today! ^^ 

>> correct
 See you very soon!

>> correct

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