Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It sounds weird or unusual, but this is a common belief in our country.
I have heard stories about this, so somehow I believe it. ^^
Anyway, let\'s talk more about this.
I\'ll see you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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Yesterday, we talked about superstition and we haven\'t finished this topic yet.
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First, I am wondering about the reason why you don\'t say \'forever\' there.
>> correct (Well, it became a joke for us, since a lot of couples are breaking up even married ones.)
Second, you said it is not advisable for you to wear your wedding dress before your wedding.
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In this case, how can you choose your wedding dress?
>> correct (Usually, this is a day before the wedding. It\'s because people believe that the wedding will not continue or happen.)
Moreover, how can you mend the wedding dress on your body?
>> correct (We have to measure and fit it first, but after fitting it and everything\'s okay, then you shouldn\'t wear it again.)
I am curios about them and pleas make me understand. ^^
>> I am curious about them and please make me understand further. ^^
See you very soon! ^^**
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