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2017-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! Yesterday, we talked about superstition and we haven't finished this topic yet. First, I am wondering about the reason why you don't say 'forever' there. Second, you said it is not advisable for you to wear your wedding dress before your wedding. In this case, how can you choose your wedding dress? Moreover, how can you mend the wedding dress on your body? I am curios about them and pleas make me understand. ^^ See you very soon! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


It sounds weird or unusual, but this is a common belief in our country.

I have heard stories about this, so somehow I believe it. ^^

Anyway, let\'s talk more about this.

I\'ll see you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^^

 

Good afternoon, teacher!

>> correct
 Yesterday, we talked about superstition and we haven\'t finished this topic yet. 

>> correct
 First, I am wondering about the reason why you don\'t say \'forever\' there. 

>> correct (Well, it became a joke for us, since a lot of couples are breaking up even married ones.)
 Second, you said it is not advisable for you to wear your wedding dress before your wedding. 

>> correct 
 In this case, how can you choose your wedding dress? 

 >> correct (Usually, this is a day before the wedding. It\'s because people believe that the wedding will not continue or happen.)
Moreover, how can you mend the wedding dress on your body? 

>> correct (We have to measure and fit it first, but after fitting it and everything\'s okay, then you shouldn\'t wear it again.)
 I am curios about them and pleas make me understand. ^^

>> I am curious about them and please make me understand further. ^^
 See you very soon! ^^**

>> correct

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