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2017-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! We talked about superstition for two days and I am going to let you know more superstitions in our country. 1. If you give a sigh, you will get a bad luck. 2. If you eat seaweed soup or porridge before you are about to take a test, you will spoil your exam. 3. We don't usually get married at the age with number 9 like 19,29,39,49. 4. If you see a crow, you will have a bad luck. 5. We should not stick a spoon in the middle of a bowl of rice. Enjoy reading and let's talk about a topic, which is about 'Would you buy a house even though it's way beyond your budget?'! See you very soon! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Good afternoon and happy hump day!
Wow! These are interesting!
I know that you are not that much of a believer about superstitions.
See you later with a new topic!

_Teacher Dianne ^_^

Good afternoon, teacher!
>> correct
We talked about superstition for two days and I am going to let you know more superstitions in our country.
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1. If you give a sigh, you will get a bad luck.
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>> or: You will have a bad luck if you sigh.
2. If you eat seaweed soup or porridge before you are about to take a test, you will spoil your exam.
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3. We don\'t usually get married at the age with number 9 like 19,29,39,49.
>> We don\'t usually get married at the age with number 9 like 19, 29, 39, and 49.
>> or: We don\'t usually marry if our age has 9 like 19, 29, 39, and 49.
4. If you see a crow, you will have a bad luck.
>> correct
5. We should not stick a spoon in the middle of a bowl of rice.
>> correct
Enjoy reading and let\'s talk about a topic, which is about \'Would you buy a house even though it\'s way beyond your budget?\'
>> correct
See you very soon! ^^**
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