Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for voting and for participating with out event. ^^
Anyway, I\'ll tell you about the result next week.
I have to control my mouth now otherwise I will spoil the competition. hahaha
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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A happy Thursday to you!
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I have voted for one of eggs and I can\'t guess which one is yours. Hehehe!
>> I have voted for one of the eggs and I couldn\'t guess which one is yours. Hehehe! (I want to tell you, but I\'m not yet allowed. hahaha)
I really like \'Larva\' so I chose it this time.
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I am really curious which one is yours.
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I hope you will get a good record this time.
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Well, you only can tell me that after finishing the vote. ^^;;
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By the way, we didn\'t have enough time to talk about yesterday\'s topic.
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Let\'s keep on talking about the topic today!
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See you very soon! ^^
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