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2017-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good afternoon, teacher! A happy Thursday to you! I have voted for one of eggs and I can't guess which one is yours. Hehehe! I really like 'Larva' so I chose it this time. I am really curious which one is yours. I hope you will get a good record this time. Well, you only can tell me that after finishing the vote. ^^;; By the way, we didn't have enough time to talk about yesterday's topic. Let's keep on talking about the topic today! See you very soon! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Thank you for voting and for participating with out event. ^^

Anyway, I\'ll tell you about the result next week.

I have to control my mouth now otherwise I will spoil the competition. hahaha

See you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^

 

Good afternoon, teacher!

>> correct
 A happy Thursday to you!

>> correct
 I have voted for one of eggs and I can\'t guess which one is yours. Hehehe!

>>  I have voted for one of the eggs and I couldn\'t guess which one is yours. Hehehe! (I want to tell you, but I\'m not yet allowed. hahaha)
 I really like \'Larva\' so I chose it this time. 

>> correct
 I am really curious which one is yours. 

>> correct
 I hope you will get a good record this time. 

>> correct
 Well, you only can tell me that after finishing the vote. ^^;; 

>> correct
 By the way, we didn\'t have enough time to talk about yesterday\'s topic.

>> correct
 Let\'s keep on talking about the topic today!

>> correct
 See you very soon! ^^

>> correct

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