Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It\'s really sad not to hear your stories and ideas about a certain topic.
Well, I\'m happy that you\'ll have something to do to earn money for the future.
Good luck!
Hope to see you again! ^^
_Teacher Dianne
Good afternoon, teacher!
>> Good afternoon, Teacher!
First, I have to tell you something.
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>> Or: First, I want to tell you something.
I have a good chance to teach a student Chinese after work so I can\'t help but adjust my class.
>> I have a good chance to teach a Chinese student after work so I can\'t help but to adjust the time of my class.
I am going to change to the morning class so I\'m sad, but today is our last class.
>> I am going to change the class time in the morning so I\'m sad, but today is our last class.
I will tell you more about my schedule during our class.
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See you soon!
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