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2017-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher! First, I have to tell you something. I have a good chance to teach a student Chinese after work so I can't help but adjust my class. I am going to change to the morning class so I'm sad, but today is our last class. I will tell you more about my schedule during our class. See you soon!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It\'s really sad not to hear your stories and ideas about a certain topic.

Well, I\'m happy that you\'ll have something to do to earn money for the future.

Good luck!

Hope to see you again! ^^


_Teacher Dianne  


Good afternoon, teacher!

>> Good afternoon, Teacher!
 First, I have to tell you something. 

> correct

>> Or:  First, I want to tell you something. 
 I have a good chance to teach a student Chinese after work so I can\'t help but adjust my class. 

>>  I have a good chance to teach a Chinese student after work so I can\'t help but to adjust the time of my class. 

I am going to change to the morning class so I\'m sad, but today is our last class. 

>> I am going to change the class time in the morning so I\'m sad, but today is our last class. 
 I will tell you more about my schedule during our class. 

> correct
 See you soon!

> correct

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