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Hi Bella my Dear! Thank you for your composition. I뭢 sure these things would really help save electricity. :) Have a great day!
Idea Suggestion
>> Ideas/Suggestions
Saving electricity cost
>>Saving electricity
1. Turn off the light and air conditioner all floor at the lunch time(12:00~13:00)
>>Switch off the lights and air conditioners in all floors at lunch time(12:00~13:00)
2. Keep going the temperature of the interior of office 24~26 in Summer season and 18~22 in Winter season.
>> Maintain a temperature of 24~26 in Summer season and 18~22 in Winter season in the interior office.
3. Turn off the light if there are nobody in toilet.
>>Switch off the light if nobody뭩 using the restroom.
4. Turn off the light and air conditoner and computer all floor if you lastly leave the office.
>> Switch off the lights, air conditioners and computers in all floors upon leaving the office.
5. Making family day-> Go to the home early 30 minuite every Friday(Friday is deprecite working efficiency. So, turn off your computer and light and air conditioner all floor and go to th home early 30 minuite.)
>>Having a family day : Go home 30 minutes before the time every Friday. Switch off computers, lights and air conditioners in all floors 30 minutes before the time.
* Require practice all emplyee no one or two.
>> Require employees to practice these things.
* Promote lovely relations between family or friends
>> Promote lovely relations between family and friends.
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