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2017-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! A happy Friday to you! I am going to do my homework that you gave. 1. ________ his sickness he attended the class yesterday. -> despite 2. ________ he didn't feel well, he went fishing. -> although 3. We arrived at the meeting on time _______ heavy traffic. -> despite 4. I failed in my chemistry exam ________ I studied all night. -> although 5. ________ all my effort, I couldn't convince my parents to let me go out. -> despite 6. ________ his anger, he apologized to his friend for shouting. -> despite 7. Claudia has many friends _________ she is very shy. -> although 8. ________ I was afraid of dark, I had to walk home alone yesterday night. -> although 9. We finished the race as the first _________ many difficulties. -> despite 10. _________ she can't see well, she prefers to sit in the back. -> although Have a wonderful weekend and watch yourself during the company activity! Let's talk about 'How to relieve or remove your stress?'! See you on Monday! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for giving a time to do your homework. I do appreciate it and please continue to study English very well. I know that you are getting there. Please take a review on using articles and prepositions. You are amazing because you got perfect score! See you on Monday!^^

Here are the correct answers!^^

~T. Eunice~

Key answers

1. Despite
2. Although
3. despite
4. although
5. Despite
6. Despite
7. although
8. Although
9. despite
10. Although 



Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 A happy Friday to you! 

>> Correct
 I am going to do my homework that you gave.
>> Correct
1. ________ his sickness he attended the class yesterday.
-> despite 

>> Correct
 2. ________ he didn\'t feel well, he went fishing.
-> although

>> Correct
 3. We arrived at the meeting on time _______ heavy traffic.
-> despite 

>> Correct
 4. I failed in my chemistry exam ________ I studied all night.
-> although

>> Correct
 5. ________ all my effort, I couldn\'t convince my parents to let me go out.
-> despite

>> Correct 
6. ________ his anger, he apologized to his friend for shouting.
-> despite 

>> Correct
 7. Claudia has many friends _________ she is very shy.
-> although

>> Correct
 8. ________ I was afraid of dark, I had to walk home alone yesterday night.
-> although

>> Correct
 9. We finished the race as the first _________ many difficulties.
-> despite 

>> Correct
 10. _________ she can\'t see well, she prefers to sit in the back.
-> although

>> Correct

 Have a wonderful weekend and watch yourself during the company activity!

>> Correct
 Let\'s talk about \'How to relieve or remove your stress?\'!

>> Correct
 See you on Monday! ^^

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