Composition

2017-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! A happy Friday to you! I hope you will have a wonderful weekend. I'd like you to check if some sentences that I wrote down are correct. *We took a long holiday in the first week. *I have wanted to take your class from a long time ago. *What is keeping you busy? *You are very loyal. *How many cups of coffee do you drink in one day? *I drink half a cup of coffee. *If I drink more than one coffee, I won’t be able to sleep. *It is not a perfect time and I don’t know when I am going to get married. *It is very stressful. *Exactly, it is! *I really love going on a trip. Let's talk about our daily schedule on Monday! See you!^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!

Thank you for sending this in. Thank you for being diligent. I really admire your dedication in learning the English language. Keep up the good work.

Happy weekend!

~Kelly^^ 

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct.
A happy Friday to you! 

>> Correct.
I hope you will have a wonderful weekend. 

>> Correct.
I\'d like you to check if some sentences that I wrote down are correct. 

>> I\'d like you to check if the sentences that I wrote down are correct.
*We took a long holiday in the first week. 

>> We took a long holiday in the first week of May.  
*What is keeping you busy?

>> Correct.
*You are very loyal. 

>> Correct.
*How many cups of coffee do you drink in one day?

>> Correct.
*I drink half a cup of coffee. 

>> Correct.
*If I drink more than one coffee, I won’t be able to sleep. 

>> *If I drink more than one cup of coffee, I won’t be able to sleep. 
*It is not a perfect time and I don’t know when I am going to get married. 

>> It is not the perfect time and I don\'t know when I am going to get married. 
*It is very stressful. 

>> Correct.
*Exactly, it is!

>> Correct.
*I really love going on a trip. 

>> Correct.
Let\'s talk about our daily schedule on Monday!

>> Correct.
See you!^^**

>> Correct.

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