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2017-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! These are the sentences that I reviewed with my recording. Please help me check them out. *We live far away from each other. *I feel a bit sad. *She is a homebody. *He is already an adolescent. *He prefers to spend time with his peers better than his relatives. *They live with my youngest brother. *I visit them every two months. *Unlike you, I don't have a niece or a nephew. *Sometimes, I feel guilty. *You focus more on your duty as a daughter. *She is pitiful. *I pity her. See you! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^

Thank you for being diligent in reviewing our lessons every day. I really appreciate your time and effort. keep it up!^^ 

Have a nice day!

~Kelly^^

Good afternoon, Teacher!

>> Correct.
These are the sentences that I reviewed with my recording. 

>> Correct.
Please help me check them out. 

>> Correct.
*We live far away from each other. 

>> Correct.

or:

>> We live far from one another.
 *I feel a bit sad. 

>> Correct.

or:

>> I feel a little sad.
*She is a homebody. 

>> Correct.
*He is already an adolescent. 

>> Correct.
*He prefers to spend time with his peers better than his relatives. 

>> He prefers to spend time with his peers more than his relatives.  
*They live with my youngest brother. 

>> Correct.

*I visit them every two months. 

>> Correct.
*Unlike you, I don\'t have a niece or a nephew.

>> Correct.
 *Sometimes, I feel guilty. 

>> Correct.
*You focus more on your duty as a daughter. 

>> Correct.
*She is pitiful. 

>> Correct.
*I pity her. 

>> Correct.
See you! ^^

>> Correct.

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