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2017-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! I'd like you to check the sentences that I wrote down. * I decided to transfer my bedroom to another room. * I converted it to a bedroom. * He likes going on an indoor wall climbing. * I'd rather take a nap than eat. * Are you conscious about your food intake? * I eat half an apple every day. I hope you won't have a Monday sickness. Finally, I'd like to propose a topic, which is about 'Personality'. See you then! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sending this in.
I am looking forward to speaking with you about personality. Enjoy the rest of your day!^^
~Kelly^^
Good afternoon, Teacher!
>> Good afternoon teacher!
I\'d like you to check the sentences that I wrote down.
>> Correct.
* I decided to transfer my bedroom to another room.
>> I decided to convert our other room into a bedroom and transferred there.
* I converted it to a bedroom.
>> Correct.
* He likes going on an indoor wall climbing.
>> Correct.
* I\'d rather take a nap than eat.
>> Correct.
* Are you conscious about your food intake?
>> Correct.
* I eat half an apple every day.
>> Correct.
I hope you won\'t have a Monday sickness.
>> Correct.
Finally, I\'d like to propose a topic, which is about \'Personality\'.
>> Correct.
See you then! ^^
>> Correct.

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