Composition

Good afternoon [이름]!

How are you doing? I hope that you are enjoying your day.^^ Anyway, please go over some of the sentences which I checked today. Thank you again for your effort. See you tomorrow.^^

~Kelly^^

Good afternoon,Teacher!

>> Good afternoon, teacher!
I am being diligent today again.

>> I am being diligent again today.

>> Today, I am being diligent again.
Please help me check the sentences out. 

>> Correct.
*She has a mosquito net over the bed. 

>> Correct.
*I am not so sure if they will be offended so I try to be very careful. 

>> Correct.

or:

>> I am not so sure if they will be offended or not, so I try to be very careful. 
*I have friends who are younger than me in their twenties. 

>> I have friends who are younger than me, they are in their twenties. 
*What personality traits do you consider important in good friends? 

>> Correct.
*It will be easier to build a strong relationship with him or her. 

>> Correct.
*I have a routine regularly. 

>> I have a daily routine.
*I wake up early even on weekends.
>> Correct.
Let\'s talk about the topic, \'How to relieve or remove your stress?\'!

>> Correct.
 See you tomorrow!^^

>> Correct.