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2017-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Good morning, teacher! A happy hump day to you! Those are the sentences that I wrote down from the recording of our class. Please help me check them out. *The atmosphere is really relaxing. *He can't bear the situation that I deal with things late. *How does stress affect you? *I hear my heart beats fast when I am under stress. *It makes me feel anxious. -> Question: If I use the word 'anxiety', is it a wrong expression? *Coffee makes your stress a litter lighter. *Do you also engage in other activities? *I go up the stairs. *We need to meet someone who will assure us that he or she is on our side. *There are so many requires to finish. *Nothing of my schedule has changed. *How do you find in a new system here at Power English? That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^ P.S.: Let's talk about the topic 'Is marriage stressful for women?'!

강사 첨삭

Good day [이름]!^^

Thank you for sending this in and for constantly listening to our recording.

Enjoy the middle of the week.

~Kelly^^

Good morning, teacher!

>> Correct.
  happy hump day to you! 

>> Correct.
Those are the sentences that I wrote down from the recording of our class.

>> Correct.
 Please help me check them out.

>> Correct.
 *The atmosphere is really relaxing. 

>> Correct.
*He can\'t bear the situation that I deal with things late. 

>> Did you mean: He can\'t bear the situations and things that I deal with lately.
*How does stress affect you?

>> Correct.
*I hear my heart beats fast when I am under stress. 

>> Correct.
*It makes me feel anxious. 

>> Correct.
 > Question: If I use the word \'anxiety\', is it a wrong expression? 

>> Correct.

It is better to use anxious because you are describing how you feel. Anxiety is a noun. if you want to use that word, you say - My level of anxiety is high. Another sentence is - He felt anxiety about the possible loss of his job.

*Coffee makes your stress a litter lighter.
>> Correct.
*Do you also engage in other activities? 

>> Correct.
*I go up the stairs. 

>> Correct.
OR:

>> I climb up the stairs.
 *We need to meet someone who will assure us that he or she is on our side. 

>> Correct.
*There are so many requires to finish.

>> There are so many requirements that I have to finish.
*Nothing of my schedule has changed. 

>> Correct.
*How do you find in a new system here at Power English? 

>> How do you find the new system here at Power English? 
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

>> Correct.
 P.S.: Let\'s talk about the topic \'Is marriage stressful for women?\'!

>> Correct.

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