Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending this in and for constantly listening to our recording.
Enjoy the middle of the week.
~Kelly^^
Good morning, teacher!
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happy hump day to you!
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Those are the sentences that I wrote down from the recording of our class.
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Please help me check them out.
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*The atmosphere is really relaxing.
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*He can\'t bear the situation that I deal with things late.
>> Did you mean: He can\'t bear the situations and things that I deal with lately.
*How does stress affect you?
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*I hear my heart beats fast when I am under stress.
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*It makes me feel anxious.
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> Question: If I use the word \'anxiety\', is it a wrong expression?
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It is better to use anxious because you are describing how you feel. Anxiety is a noun. if you want to use that word, you say - My level of anxiety is high. Another sentence is - He felt anxiety about the possible loss of his job.
*Coffee makes your stress a litter lighter.
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*Do you also engage in other activities?
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*I go up the stairs.
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OR:
>> I climb up the stairs.
*We need to meet someone who will assure us that he or she is on our side.
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*There are so many requires to finish.
>> There are so many requirements that I have to finish.
*Nothing of my schedule has changed.
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*How do you find in a new system here at Power English?
>> How do you find the new system here at Power English?
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^
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P.S.: Let\'s talk about the topic \'Is marriage stressful for women?\'!
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