Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good after [이름]!
I am already excited to talk about wedding traditions in your country. Thank you for sharing interesting topics every day. I always look forward to talking with you. See you in class!^^
~Kelly^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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I finished reviewing and those are the sentences that I wrote down.
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*I go out of work at 2 PM.
>> Correct.
*It is a rainy season here in the Philippines.
>> It is rainy season here in the Philippines.
*We should go to the parents-in-law\'s house on big holidays first to worship the spirits.
>> Correct.
*We should adapt to the change in this society.
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*That can be applied if women don\'t work.
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OR:
>> That is applicable to women who don\'t work.
*Both men and women work and earn money.
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*It is very difficult to be a woman in your country.
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*They are the head of the family.
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*Do men do household chores voluntarily?
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*Men should break a superiority complex.
>> Men should break/get rid off \"superiority complex\".
*Companies think that they can\'t fulfill their role because of mother\'s duties.
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*They end up being a housewife.
>> Correct.
*If you are a regular employee, can they still enforce you to resign from the company?
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*You can spend your quality time with your husband.
>> Correct.
Let\'s talk about \'Wedding culture\' tomorrow!
>> Correct.
Have a good time for the rest of the day! ^^
>> Correct.
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