Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!^^
Thank you so much for your concern about our situation here in the Philippines. I hope that the war will end soon because many people were hurt and killed already. And, I hope the government can control the situation there. Anyway, it\'s almost weekend, so enjoy your time with your husband and your friend.^^ Take care and have a great time!^^ Be safe always~
~Kelly^^
Good morning, teacher!
>> Correct.
I forget to ask you about \'Martial law\' in your country.
>> I forgot to ask you about \'Martial law\' in your country.
I heard it from news and I am shocked about the reason why the President can\'t help but announced the martial law.
>> I heard it from the news and I am shocked about the reason why the President couldn\'t help but declare martial law.
The Islamic militia group is attacking Mindanao state and it seems like a very serious situation.
>> Correct.
Even if Mindanao is far from your city, I feel still worried about your situation.
>> Even if Mindanao is far from your city, I still feel worried about your situation.
I hope nothing will happen to everyone.
>> Correct.
Finally, I am being diligent again.
>> Correct.
Please help me check them out.
>> Please help me check these out.
*People focus on the formalities.
>> People focus on the formalities of the occasion.
*Is it okay if I ask how much those couples spend for their wedding?
>> Correct.
*\'Studio\' indicates a place to have our wedding pictures taken.
>> Correct.
*The wedding venue is also very expensive.
>> Correct.
*Women have to buy home appliances.
>> Correct.
*I paid half the price of the house.
>> Correct.
*The groom\'s family pay for the wedding.
>> The groom\'s family pays for the wedding.
*Some people still require a dowry in the country side.
>> Correct.
*You are not allowed to try on your wedding dress before the exact wedding day.
>> You are not allowed to try on your wedding dress before your exact wedding day.
>> You are not allowed to try on your wedding dress before your wedding day.
I hope you have a wonderful weekend with your friend.^^
>> Correct.
P.S.: The topic for the next class is \'A low birth rate\'.
>> P.S.: The topic for the next class is \'low birth rate\'.
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