Composition

Good day, [이름]!

Thank you for being consistent with your enthusiasm for learning. Keep the flame of your eagerness to learn burning!

Have a good day. I am already excited to discuss our next lesson.^^ See you!

~Kelly^^

Good afternoon, teacher!

>> Correct.
Please help me check those out.

>> Please help me check my sentences.
*What about the role of the government in this situation in the long term? 

>> What about the long term role of the government in this situation?
*They are not financially prepared so just depend on their parents. 

>> They are not financially prepared, so they just depend on their parents. 
*Their parents shoulder the expenses. 

>> Correct.
*Our population has reached more than 100 million.

>> Correct.
*What could be the effect to employment?

>> Correct.
*Is it also affected to the men power system if there is low birth rate?

>> Do you think the manpower system will also be affected because of low birth rate?
*The fourth industrial revolution will eventually cause employment to fall sharply.
>> Correct.
Always thank you to listen to my words carefully during our class! 

>> I want to thank you for always listening carefully to what I say during our class.
See you tomorrow! ^^**
>> Correct.
P.S.: I\'d like to suggest a topic, which is about \'Is it a good thing to deliver a baby in the age of the forth industrial revolution?\'.

>> Correct.