Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I am glad that no matter what happens, you will not skip doing your homework. Anyway, I am so proud of you because you challenge yourself to more discuss more difficult topics. Don\'t be sorry that you chose it because you were able to share a lot of great insights. You actually did a great job. Be proud of yourself!^^ See you tomorrow and let\'s talk about another interesting topic. :)
~Kelly^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
>> Correct.
Today\'t topic was very difficult for me to express in English, so my brain became blank.
>>Today\'s topic was very difficult, so I had a hard time expressing myself in English, and my brain went blank.
I don\'t know why I chose this topic. ^^;;
>> Correct.
I need more time to train myself to make a good conversation in English.^^;;
>> Correct.
No matter how, I won\'t skip my daily homework.
>> Correct.
*I was amazed that artificial intelligence beat Mr.Lee on the Baduk game.
>> I was amazed that artificial intelligence beat Mr. [Name] on Baduk game.
* There is a premonition of defeat.
>> There was a premonition of defeat.
* Our technology has great potential to be developed.
>> Correct.
* We call them \'toddler\'.
>> We call them \'toddlers\'.
* Parents have an idea on how to discipline their children.
>> Correct.
* At what age should children be exposed to mobile phones?
>> Correct.
* Many young people get pregnant at such a young age.
>> Correct.
* Is teenage pregnancy a problem?
>> Correct.
Finally, let\'t talk about \'table manners\'!
>> Correct.
***let\'s
See you tomorrow!
>> Correct.
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