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2017-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher! We talked about an interesting topic. There are only 3 sentences that I wrote down today. * When dining, we have to wait until all the foods are served on the table. * That is only time that we get to share what happened during the day. * What our parents teach us is not to talk while your mouth is full. Tomorrow, let's talk about 'Superstition'! Have a good time for the rest of the day and see you very tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!^^

Thank you so much for another interesting topic today. I learned much about table manners in your country.^^

I will see you again tomorrow. 

~ Kelly^^

Good afternoon, teacher!

>> Correct.
We talked about an interesting topic. 

>> Correct.
There are only 3 sentences that I wrote down today.
>> Correct.

* When dining, we have to wait until all the foods are served on the table. 

>> When dining out, we have to wait until all the foods are served on the table. 
* That is only time that we get to share what happened during the day. 

>> That is the only time that we get to share about what happened during the day. 
* What our parents teach us is not to talk while your mouth is full. 

>> Correct.

or: 

>> Our parents taught us not to talk while our mouth is full.
Tomorrow, let\'s talk about \'Superstition\'!

>> Correct.
Have a good time for the rest of the day and see you very tomorrow! ^^**

>> Have a good time for the rest of the day and see you again tomorrow! ^^**

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