Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!^^
Thank you so much for another interesting topic today. I learned much about table manners in your country.^^
I will see you again tomorrow.
~ Kelly^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
>> Correct.
We talked about an interesting topic.
>> Correct.
There are only 3 sentences that I wrote down today.
>> Correct.
* When dining, we have to wait until all the foods are served on the table.
>> When dining out, we have to wait until all the foods are served on the table.
* That is only time that we get to share what happened during the day.
>> That is the only time that we get to share about what happened during the day.
* What our parents teach us is not to talk while your mouth is full.
>> Correct.
or:
>> Our parents taught us not to talk while our mouth is full.
Tomorrow, let\'s talk about \'Superstition\'!
>> Correct.
Have a good time for the rest of the day and see you very tomorrow! ^^**
>> Have a good time for the rest of the day and see you again tomorrow! ^^**
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