Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!
Thank you for sending this in. I hope that you had lunch already. Anyway, Enjoy the rest of your day!^^
Take care!
~Kelly^^
Good afternoon, teacher!
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I am glad to hear that it is sunny there.
>> Correct.
In contrast, it is raining here but it is good news to everyone because we have been suffered from a drought.
>> In contrast, it is raining here but it is good news to everyone because we have been suffering from drought.
However, today\'s precipitation is light, so we are still looking forward to another rain to fall.
>> Correct.
Anyway, I hope you can enjoy the good weather today! ^^
>> Correct.
That is all for today and see you tomorrow!
>> Correct.
P.S.: Please help me check those out.
>> Correct.
OR:
>> Please help me check this out.
Finally, I\'d like to talk about the topic, which is about \'How wide is the gender gap in your country?\'
>> Correct.
It is from the Essay that you gave me. ^^;;
>> Correct.
*That is a solution to your problem.
>> Correct.
*Seaweed is sticky and slippery.
>> Correct.
*A person with a mole on the central of him or her nose will be rich but unhappy.
>> A person with a mole on the center of his or her nose will be rich but unhappy.
*A coffin should be built to fit the dead person.
>> Correct.
*Sweeping the floor at night will drive away a god luck.
>> Sweeping the floor at night will drive away good luck.
*There is nothing wrong in following those superstitions.
>> Correct.
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