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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning my dear Bella!
Thank you again for your composition.
Kindly check the corrections i made.
Have a nice day !!
-Teacher Camille-
Dear [Name],
>>Correct.
Good morning!
>>Correct.
The parts is holding now.
>> They are holding the parts now.
Because TNT said that we can't send to a foreign using " Debit note" and TNT need "Invoice" not debit note.
>> Because TNT said that we can't send to a foreign using Debit note because what they accept is an invoice.
So TNT didn't accept the parts with "debit note".
>> So TNT didn't accept debit note.
And we discuss again that we issue the manual invoice or solved the other ways.
>> We discussed the issue about manual invoice.
I will tell Mr. [Name] from Logistic or Mr. [Name] woonho from Quality solution after discuss.
>>I will talk to Mr. [Name] or Mr. [Name] from quality solution about this matter.
And Logistic guys send to Hambach the parts.
>> People from Logistic send the parts to Hambach.
Would you please wait a several days?
>> Would you please wait for several days?
We will give you quick reply.
>>We will reply as soon as we can.
Thank you for your help.
>> Correct.
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