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2011-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name], Good morning! The parts is holding now. Because TNT said that we can't send to a foreign using " Debit note" and TNT need "Invoice" not debit note. So TNT didn't accept the parts with "debit note". And we discuss again that we issue the manual invoice or solved the other ways. I will tell Mr. [Name] from Logistic or Mr. [Name] woonho from Quality solution after discuss. And Logistic guys send to Hambach the parts. Would you please wait a several days? We will give you quick reply. Thank you for your help.

강사 첨삭

Good morning my dear Bella!

Thank you again for your composition.

Kindly check the corrections i made.

Have a nice day !!

-Teacher Camille-

 

Dear [Name],
>>Correct.
Good morning!
>>Correct.
The parts is holding now.
>> They are holding the parts now.
Because TNT said that we can't send to a foreign using " Debit note" and TNT need "Invoice" not debit note.
>> Because TNT said that we can't send to a foreign using Debit note because what they accept is an invoice.

So TNT didn't accept the parts with "debit note".
>> So TNT didn't accept debit note.

And we discuss again that we issue the manual invoice or solved the other ways.
>> We discussed the issue about manual invoice.
I will tell Mr. [Name] from Logistic or Mr. [Name] woonho from Quality solution after discuss.
>>I will talk to Mr. [Name] or Mr. [Name] from quality solution about this matter.
And Logistic guys send to Hambach the parts.
>> People from Logistic send the parts to Hambach.
Would you please wait a several days?
>> Would you please wait for several days?
We will give you quick reply.
>>We will reply as soon as we can.
Thank you for your help.

>> Correct.

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