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2011-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], Good morning! I confirmed the Intercompany balance from Bellin. But only SBTS balance didn't match. I got the list of invoices that we haven't received yet as seen below. I already requested list of another number of invoice and each amount. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Bella my dear!

Thank you once again for your composition. Check some of the corrections that i made.

Have a great day!

-Teacher Camille-

 

 Dear [Name],
>>
Good morning!
>>
I confirmed the Intercompany balance from Bellin. But only SBTS balance didn't match.
>> I confirmed that the intercompany balance from Bellin is correct, but it didn뭪 match with SBTS balance.
I got the list of invoices that we haven't received yet as seen below.
>> Correct.
I already requested list of another number of invoice and each amount.
>> I already requested the list of other invoices and their total amounts.
I'm looking forward for your reply.

>> Correct.
Thank you.

>> Correct.

>>Correct. 

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